Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 7. Show all posts

Friday, March 3, 2017

Famous Last Words: What a Week! - Week 7

(Moving day!!; personal photo, taken by me)
We moved this week. I was a little frustrated, because I had to miss class Wednesday and I really hate to miss class. I didn't really have a choice though, because my boss would not let me off of work for Tuesday, the day we closed on the house. So, we had to wait until Wednesday. It has been a really weird and hectic week. First of all, I'm about 13 miles further from OU now but I now live 15 miles closer to school and about 15 miles closer to my minor step son now. You have to take the good and bad together, I suppose. Being further from school isn't very fun, because I have to get up earlier and I also now have to take one of the busiest city highways to get to school. Whereas before, I was able to take mostly back roads and I didn't have to deal with traffic too much. However, both being closer to my step son and being closer to work are major bonuses in my book, because I will use less gas to go to work, I can leave a little bit later and will be home a little earlier at night, and it won't take as long or use as much gas to pick up my step son and also, I'll get to see him a lot more now that we're closer so it will be much easier to spend time with him. I haven't lived in the city for about 12 or 13 years and it is definitely an adjustment for me. Nothing bad, so far: just "different". We live right by the highway now(like literally, there is a brick barrier that sits just behind our back yard and if it weren't there I would be able to walk out my back gate and straight up onto the highway!) but the city sounds, such as traffic, are actually calming to me. I guess that's because I grew up in the city, so the country sounds have freaked me out on many occasions over the last 12 or 13 years. You would think I would have adjusted by now but I haven't apparently. Lol. It is also incredible that there are so many stores REALLY close to my house now. I have a grocery store within walking distance, although I would more than likely never walk up there (but you never know). There are all kinds of fast food places and different merchandise stores. I absolutely love it. I really did not realize how much I missed the city until the last few days, being back in the city.

Since I'm ahead in Myth and Folklore, I didn't have any reading to do for this week. Instead, I did some reflection assignments, in preparation for Spring Break. So there isn't too much to report on that front. In my Spanish class, however, I think I've maybe finally made a really big stride this week. In the class I'm currently in, I have to make 4 phone calls to someone in another country throughout the semester. It's on a system called "TalkAbroad" and you have to pay for these conversations. It's set up similar to skype, where you can video chat with your "conversation partner". The first one was absolutely horrible for me. I felt like an idiot and I'm pretty sure my conversation partner hated "talking" to me. It was just not a good experience. This week, I had to make phone call number two and I'm really happy with how it went. I actually didn't even realize that my 30 minute conversation was coming to a close until the man I was talking to thanked me for talking to him and started to say goodbye! I was extremely proud of myself and how smoothly that conversation went, because I've really struggled in that area. So, for me, being able to carry on a 30 minute conversation was a big stride! I was also able to keep up with my "ahead of the class" schedule this week, in spite of moving 20 miles away and trying to get everything set up, so I'm pretty proud of that as well!

I think that's about all for this week. Check back for more adventures with my new home next week around this time!!

Sunday, February 26, 2017

Week 7 Story: The Dying Sultan

(Vervet monkey; online source, www.wikiwand.com)

     Once upon a time, a renowned sultan in southern Turkey grew very ill in a matter of hours. At night’s fall, he was perfectly healthy. However, the following morning he was far too weak to rise with the sun. He called out for his daughters, who quickly rushed to his aid. With their help, he was able to sit up in bed, propped against several pillows. His oldest daughter pulled the blankets back to cover his lower half and the grave look taking over her face told him something was terribly wrong. “What’s wrong, child?” he asked weakly. She hesitated as her eyes flooded with tears. Unable to speak, she slowly pulled the covers back, revealing a small green succulent covered with dark purple and black spots. They all knew what it was and what it meant. Someone had poisoned the sultan. His death would be certain in no more than three weeks time without a cure. Years of traditional teachings, carried down from generations before had taught him that his only escape from death at that point was to consume the heart of a monkey. Not just any monkey, though. He would have to consume the heart of a Chlorecebus Pygerythrus, better known as a vervet monkey. Unfortunately, vervets weren’t commonly seen in this particular region of the country. 

     At once, the sultan called for every man, woman, child, and animal in the area to gather around. With his daughters’ help, he took a seat on the balcony just outside his bedroom window. The first to bring him this particular monkey, alive and well, would be granted a lifetime of riches. He promised, “If any of you bring me this monkey, you will never worry about finances or where your next meal might come from. Anything your heart may desire, you will have. Finally, I will assure your protection from any enemies to the best of my ability.” With that, most every being around, animals included, set off in search of the much sought after primate.

     As the days passed, the sultan began to lose hope. People from all around brought him monkeys of many different species, none of which were living vervet monkeys. On the fourth morning a lynx appeared at the sultan’s door, carrying a half dead vervet between his teeth. Had he owned the strength, the sultan may have berated the lynx for bringing such a pitiful thing to his door. However, he simply sent him away, warning him not to come back unless he could bring a monkey that was both alive AND well to him. By the eve of the eleventh day, the sultan had effectively given up. He grew weaker everyday. He knew he was going to die soon and he was ready to accept that. His daughters, however, weren’t ready to let go. On the eleventh morning, the eldest called for all to gather around once again.

     She swore to build a house made of gold for the victor. “I’ll surround the house with a spring with the most crisp, clean water one could wish for and anything else that might be desired.” Furthermore, she promised her own hand in marriage to any man that came forth with the desired creature. With a new rush of enthusiasm, they all set out, searching further and wider for a vervet monkey to bring to the sultan.

     With such extravagant gifts at stake, the rivalry became fierce. Men attacked each other in hopes of lessening the competition. Friend and foe alike were left for dead, their conqueror hoping for victory over the thousands of others in the race. The sultan soon saw his country falling apart before his eyes. For what?, he thought, to grant myself another decade or so before I succumb to old age? He decided then what he would do. He mustered up the strength to sit up in bed and scratched out a quick note, explaining his choice the best he could. He didn’t have the strength in his legs to walk to the balcony, so he crawled. His last thought before his death was that he hoped his daughters and his followers would understand this final selfless act. He used the last of his remaining strength to shove his body through the barrier and over the edge. His daughters, standing below, watched in horror as their father’s body fell hard against the ground.


Authors note
In the original story a monkey and a shark become unexpected friends. The monkey feeds the shark delicious fruits from the tree where they first met and the shark eventually tells him he feels bad that he has nothing to give back. So, he convinces the monkey to travel home with him so he can show the monkey all the glorious things his home land has to offer. Then, halfway through the twelve day trip through water, the shark announces that he hasn’t been completely honest with the monkey. He tells him that the sultan of his home is very ill and the only thing that could possibly cure the poor man is to eat the heart of a monkey. The monkey then tells his so-called friend that he’d left his heart at home that day and he would gladly help the sultan if he could go home and retrieve it. Then, once the shark takes him home, he admits that he never intended to allow the sultan to eat his heart and runs away.

The way their unlikely friendship ended made me sad and I wanted to allow the possibility of an alternate ending for them. So, I decided to explain how the sultan became sick and the circumstances surrounding the search for a monkey’s heart. I liked the emotional value of a friendship ending in the midst of the sultan’s illness, so I kept that conflict in my story, although I didn't use the original two characters. Then I chose to have the sultan end the madness by taking his own life in the ultimate self sacrifice, because it would allow for friendships to possibly be mended.

Source
"African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books", by Andrew Lang, online source

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Reading Notes: African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books, Part B

The first story here, "Hassebu" was slightly harder for me to read than the others in part A of this set. I thought it was cool that Hassebu found something to do but then he was betrayed and left to die and I was so sad for him. I felt the betrayal for him. I love stories written in this manner and I really hope that I'm able to capture raw emotion in my readers as I write. So, that's what I'd like to take from this story: the ability to really pull out the emotions of my readers.

"The Heart of a Monkey" is a cute story and I liked that the shark made friend's with the money. I enjoyed imagining the monkey hanging out on the cliff, talking to the shark. I didn't like that the shark ended up trying to sacrifice the monkey to his king though, so maybe I could write something about these two with a different ending. I'd like them to remain friends, rather than enemies!

I also really like the story within a story style of writing that's used in "The Heart of a Monkey: The Washerman's Donkey". I'd love to write something in this style but I've avoided trying because I'm worried that my attempt will not work out as smoothly as I'd like it to. Maybe this week I will attempt to write a story within a story.

Finally, "Makoma" inspired me to write something a little more mythical than most of my writing has been. I loved that when he overtook someone, he took in their powers. I think I could definitely write something using this premise. If I decide to go with this, I could combine more than one of my ideas together and use the generational story as well. I also liked the overall message that it's lonely at the top.

(If it's lonely at the top; online source, pattidawnswansson.wordpress.com)

I definitely think that whatever I write this week is going to combine some of the overarching themes from more than one of these stories.

Source
"African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books", by Andrew Lang, online source

Monday, February 20, 2017

Reading Notes: African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books, Part A

I really liked the use of an ogre in the first story of this set, "Motikatika" because I haven't read much involving ogres and it was interesting to read a story involving one. I think it might be fun to write something about ogres but I'd like to do more research on the history of them first since I don't know much about them. I'm not really sure what the main point of this story would be though.

(Beware of ogre sign; online source, www.pinterest.com)

"Jackal and Spring" has a good message behind it: if you don't put forth the work, you can't reap the rewards. I think I could write something very loosely based on that message, which would give me a lot of wiggle room for what to write. I also appreciated the bravery of the tortoise in this one. It made me laugh a little trying to imagine a tortoise attacking a jackal but I like the idea of the unlikely hero.

(Jackal by the Spring; online source, www.goodfon.su)

In "Adventures of a Jackal", I really liked the plot of an unlikely friendship taking place between the jackal and the hedgehog. It'd be fun to write a backstory for these two about how their friendship came to be or maybe just come up with a completely separate story line involving two creatures that become friends against all odds.

I also really love the generation story perspective used for "Adventures of a Jackal", "Adventures of Jackal's Eldest Son", and "Adventure's of Younger Son of Jackal". These were written more like three separate stories, rather than a continued piece but I think I'd enjoy writing a more continual piece. Maybe some sort of tradition taking form within a family, from the grandparents down to the grandchildren or something.

I don't have any very specific ideas from this set so far but I have a couple big picture ideas that I can work with.

Source
"African Stories from Lang's Fairy Books", by Andrew Lang, online source